Elevator Pitch #2 or https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RAqhJQf8Y-k&feature=youtu.be
^Watch my Elevator Pitch!
^Watch my Elevator Pitch!
My classmates were very encouraging, so I decided to do MORE
of what they complimented. They said that it was good how I curried my name
into the pitch, that I spoke slowly and deliberately with good expression. They
also liked my little “asides”, and statistics. Looking back, I realize that I
should be making the pitch to investors, not the small bank I’m eventually
going to be working with and selling to (thanks, Dr. Pryor for that info).
Also, I have slightly changed my idea to charge a small fee to the end user, so
my arguments for why the customers will want to use my information will have to
change to reflect the new customer. I pitched as if I had been doing the business for a while, and now I need funds to expand.
(Source: https://www.investopedia.com/ask/answers/060415/how-does-marginal-propensity-consume-united-states-compare-other-countries.asp )
Thanks for listening!
I believe you changing your idea was great. Having consistent and habitual growth in your mindset, and always improving is vital to success and should never be underutilized. In Entrepreneurship we are always consistently growing, and learning from others and others mindsets. There is no, know it all mindset. Always growing and learning at any age. That is what makes the younger generation great.
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ReplyDeleteFor your second pitch you improved immensely. I could see from watching the video that you were much less nervous as before. As to be expected, you slowed the delivery of your speech, which helped me gain a better understanding of your offering. For a suggestion, I would move to a more well-lit background. Your first video I thought had better lighting, this video appeared very dark. But overall your pitch improved. What is it they say, “practice makes perfect.”
ReplyDeleteHey April. Way to get creative with your pitch. I really like the way your approached it and that you were very confident and natural with your speech. My only suggestions are to try not to shift from side to side too much and when you use props hold them a little higher and longer, so the audience can see. Overall great job. Also, could you check and see if the link to my video works now? Thanks. '
Here it is: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ktFg1fqtjnWFcDE1jridliew-YHIGH_V/view?usp=sharing
I think you did a really great job April. Since your first pitch, your delivery and public speaking skills have improved tremendously. YOu seemed very comfortable and in control of your new idea. I thought the props were a very interesting idea. They definitely helped me, as a visual learner understand your points a lot better. Great job and great improvements overall.
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